I'll try my best to e-mail you some feedback this weekend, but I cannot promise anything as you have posted this assignment quite late. Regardless of that, I'll review it and e-mail you the points for this part of the research paper.
The first draft's biggest strenghts were the writers points with supported detail. Also keeping the focus on masculinities in males sports int he way the media targets those whom seem to be weak.
For the final draft i would suggest for you to include more points with detail in the inconclusion.
I'll try my best to e-mail you some feedback this weekend, but I cannot promise anything as you have posted this assignment quite late. Regardless of that, I'll review it and e-mail you the points for this part of the research paper.
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ReplyDeleteThe first draft's biggest strenghts were the writers points with supported detail. Also keeping the focus on masculinities in males sports int he way the media targets those whom seem to be weak.
ReplyDeleteFor the final draft i would suggest for you to include more points with detail in the inconclusion.